Recount writing

"Get up sahanya" my brother boomed "it's time to go to q town","yay"I yelled back....I quickly stumbled out of bed ,it was Friday somthing of July, I had waited a long time to go to q town. So i got dressed and and waited till my aunty got ready. And Finaly everyone was ready it was time to go to q town😄. Me,my brother and my aunty were going to walk to q town and remember I lived by the hospital...so It was quite a distance to walk. But my aunty said if we walk she would give us an extra $4 Dollers......so threats how I ended up walking. But I was moaning the whole way. And in about 20 minutes we arrived at q town. "About time"I said in a wobbly voice. At q tow minion saw a 20 $ doller box of awesome loom bands me and my brother were hoping it would cost 10 Dollers so we could buy two big boxes of loom bands. But noooo! ,they cost 20 Dollers so we had to share anyway.... In q town there was a Sri Lankan girl who asked if we were from Sri Lanka my aunty replied yes and they started talking in Sri Lanka. We went around the shop looking for other things to buy but at the end  we got a packet of see through s clips and charms that you put on the bracelet. Then it was time to go home dad said when it is 1:10 he would come and guess what he did come exactly at 1:10. So we hopped in the blue car and drived off. Finnaly we came to My awesome home...and I made awesome loom band bracelets and charms. In the end I had made a lot out of loom band bracelets.unfortunatly our loom snapped  but dad fixed it. That was an awesome holiday but at the same time boring but it was still ok. It wasn't the best holiday in the world but still.....