Monday 3 November 2014

Summarising

Li : to summarise 
Sc : to identify key words and phrases 
Write a summary about those two pages in your own words

These are my key words....for the book the Great Barrier Reef 

Here is my summary 

The coral reef is a unique place with lots of sea life and coral....but the green house gases are making the ocean warm up. The green house gases are releaseing carbon dioxide. This is dangerous because it can make the coral in the warter disappear. It might disappear in 50 years.... 



 

1 comment:

  1. Excellent work Sahanya. You completed this task in a timely manner. This was a good way to use Pic Collage and you identified key words, phrases that are important in the first part of the text. Plus, you have the LI and SC so I can give you specific feedback on the SC. You have identified key words and phrases and then I can see you have used them in write a brief summary of the first 2 pages of the story. SC achieved. Excellent work.
    To improve:
    Check the spelling of /releaseing/ and /warter/.

    What would you like to focus on in your reading? I look forward to viewing your improved summary.
    Miss Turner

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